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3.8 - Enemies, Negotiation and Deceit

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Reviewed By: adamelijahReview Date: 10/20/17 11:47 pm
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Threestein and Zelda both decide to come to the table and negotiate a peace. The story has a good premise and there's a bit of an emotional/romantic arc for Threestein and Mary but it just feels jammed in. The key plot twist half way is completely senseless requiring high command to screw things up for no stated reason other than furthering the plot.