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Reviewed By: EiphelReview Date: 1/20/12 7:34 pm
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I'll be honest, I don't really get this story. It seems to be 'just a bunch of stuff that happened'. The action clips along with the Doctor caught in the middle of it, but he never feels proactive, nor like he has any goal. It's just the Doctor watching a series of events unfold, and it feels like the plot got compressed into the last ten minutes. It's far from terrible, but at a surprisingly long length, it's a bit dull.