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Review Date: 2024-09-20 20:00:45
Reviewed By: Knupp Mello (98)
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The Stone’s Lament é a primeira história original notável de Bernice Summerfield pela Big Finish, carregando o legado de Doctor Who ao estar sempre à frente de seu tempo. Adrian Wall, o chefe de construção da Kilorano na Coleção Braxiatel, acompanha Benny em uma expedição arqueológica, sendo responsável por supervisionar o trabalho dela. A equipe de Adrian acaba desaparecendo misteriosamente, e logo ele e Benny descobrem que o bilionário Bratheen Traloor não está tão sozinho quanto pensavam em sua mansão. O áudio se passa em um cenário atmosférico: o planeta Rhinvil, inteiramente feito de rochas, repleto de tempestades, sombrio e desolado – o lugar perfeito para se isolar. Conhecemos o bilionário recluso, Bratheen Traloor, que vive sozinho há mais de vinte anos e decide romper seu isolamento ao convidar a Professora Bernice Summerfield para examinar um artefato misterioso descoberto durante a construção de sua mansão (ilustrada na capa). A ideia de Mike Tucker é explorar ao máximo o sentimento de obsessão e ganância, algo que transparece explicitamente nos personagens, como o próprio Traloor. Vemos a obsessão dele por Benny crescer de forma perturbadora, escalando a níveis absurdos. A interação com Benny é cheia de contrastes e momentos cômicos, especialmente quando ele percebe que alguém, fingindo ser Benny, está gritando com ele. Sua obsessão é inquietante, com fotos dela espalhadas por seu quarto e todas as suas palestras gravadas. Essa reviravolta sombria adiciona uma profundidade inesperada à trama. Mas o bilionário sofre um efeito reverso: na verdade, sua mansão é uma espécie de inteligência artificial com um sistema automatizado, comunicável, que, por algum motivo, adquiriu consciência e sentimentos. A sacada genial de Mike Tucker está na simples ideia: quem mais poderia nos conhecer do primeiro ao último fio de cabelo além de nossa própria residência? Talvez só nossos pais e família. Mas já imaginou se sua própria casa fosse um ser senciênte e ela se apaixonasse por você? Provavelmente existiriam muitos motivos, já que ela testemunhou tanta coisa e teve uma convivência significativa. Assim, inicia-se um ciúme vindo da mansão, causado (obviamente) pela obsessão do bilionário pela arqueóloga, colocando os personagens em armadilhas e situações de risco. Embora não seja uma obra-prima irretocável, The Stone’s Lament se destaca pelo desempenho de seu ótimo elenco, sua atmosfera e sua abordagem sobre comportamentos abusivos e tóxicos. Toda a trama da casa senciente tentando expulsar Benny e Adrian é muito bem construída e conduzida, e a revelação de Traloor como um obsessivo adiciona tensão e desconforto à história. Outro destaque do áudio é a primeira aparição de Adrian Wall, o famoso "Cachorrão", interpretado brilhantemente por Harry Myers. O personagem fez sua primeira aparição nos livros da Big Finish (no livro Professor Bernice Summerfield and the Doomsday Manuscript). Aliás, há um problema de cronologia na linha do tempo de Bernice Summerfield, pois há conexões entre os livros e os áudios. Na época, a empresa adotava uma estratégia de marketing que forçava o público a comprar tanto os áudios dramas quanto os livros, interligando as duas mídias em alguns casos, como em Mirror Effect e Death and the Daleks. Na maioria dos casos, essas interligações adicionam backgrounds nas relações dos personagens, que logo conhecemos nos áudios. No caso de Adrian, não se preocupe; basta pouco tempo ouvindo-o para que ele naturalmente se torne um dos seus favoritos da linha. Myers dá vida ao personagem, tornando-o um elemento essencial e carismático na narrativa. Lisa Bowerman entrega uma performance sólida como Benny, enquanto Harry Myers rouba a cena como Adrian Wall. Em resumo, The Stone’s Lament é uma boa adição à lore do universo de Bernice Summerfield, contando com um excelente enredo, ótimos personagens e momentos memoráveis.
Review Date: 2023-12-23 15:30:14
Reviewed By: Seagullslost (436)
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As with the first release in this series its a small main cast of three. Benny is called upon to help a reclusive rich guy with a relic, with her is a manager wanting to know whats happened to his building team.

Bratheen Traloor, has set up home alone on a planet, his house has a computer in charge that is more than just that. Its a bit been there done that. But perhaps less so when this was released.

Adrian Wall investigates the dissapearance of the workers, but it takes til very near the end to actually get back to thinking about them - so very much a side plot.

A bit trudgy in the middle, some parts are a bit slow to get going.

There's an irratating amount of references to Braxiatel, one or two to presumbly sow the seeds for whats to come is ok, but too much here.

There a bit of a final act, and a couple of little twists that I didn't see coming.

Generally OK, not bad, but not something I'm going to rush back to or rave about.
Review Date: 2023-09-05 08:31:10
Reviewed By: Taylor7500 (574)
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If you're looking for the moment where Big Finish finally cracked the formula and were able to write their own solid Benny stories, keep looking because this isn't it. It seems reductive to go too hard on the early Big Finish being a bit clunky and imprecise, but this one was released after Big Finish had already gotten out 20 Doctor Who monthly range stories, including several which are now considered serious classics, so they're running out of excuses to keep on botching Benny stories.

In any case, this one is clunky. Despite the reduced runtime for series 2, this one still doesn't really do anything with it. It has all the marks of an amateur writer trying to insert cute little forshadowing clues without the subtelty to pull it off. There's no shortage of the traditional Benny edgy themes, sex, and swearing (not problems on their own but when repeatedly inserted for no good reason it does start to drag); and this is where we start Big Finish half-requiring you to have absorbed Benny books and other stories to get all the references and tie-ins to this one. It's not terribly egregious and we get enough suitably clunky exposition to please people like myself who have never read the books, but be prepared going in that it seems from here on out there will be endless references to major characters and story beats which are absent from the audio range entirely.
Review Date: 2023-05-29 00:14:24
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6/10
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Bernice is accompanied by Adrian, a construction manager, on their way to visit a reclusion billionaire who had invited Bennie to examine a recently unearthed artefact. To help with his isolation, the billionaire designed an AI called House to interact with him and keep order while he is distracted with work. Upon arrival, The duo discovers the construction crew has gone missing, and with no one else on the planet except the billionaire and his AI, suspicion is quickly cast as they attempt to unearth the mystery behind the disappearances.

And much like the first adventure of Series 2, I'm fine with it. I think the cast does a great job and carries things through to the end. The story can be a tad predictable but that doesn't mean it was unsatisfying. The reason why I rated it so averagely is that while it is predictable, the adventure just takes too long for my tastes to reach the end. Cut off 5-10 minutes and I would have easily given it a 7.
Review Date: 2022-07-08 12:25:55
Reviewed By: PalindromeRose (646)
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Bernice Summerfield, Series Two

#2.02. The Stone’s Lament ~ 7/10

(BE WARNED: MY REVIEWS DO CONTAIN SPOILERS)

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A planet made entirely of rocks and filled with thunderstorms. Bleak, desolate, and the perfect place to go on holiday if you’re having a mid-life crisis and have a taste for My Chemical Romance. Welcome to Rhinvil… where Benny is going to meet a rather disturbing fan.

Let’s talk story. Bratheen Traloor, reclusive billionaire, has lived alone for over twenty years on the planet Rhinvil. Now he has broken his isolation, inviting Bernice Summerfield to examine a mysterious artefact unearthed during building work at his sprawling mansion. Accompanying Benny is Adrian Wall, the Kiloran construction manager from the Braxiatel Collection. Adrian is responsible for overseeing the work, but his construction crew has vanished, and soon he and Benny discover that Traloor is not as alone as they might think…

Lisa Bowerman does a pretty good job in ‘The Stone’s Lament’. Benny thinks the artefact on Rhinvil sounds interesting, so she’s been up bright and early to do a little bit of homework on the planet, and their host. Its clear that Adrian has some rather different views on archaeology to her, and she’s appalled at his lack of respect for history – what point is progress if the past ends up destroyed in the process? Benny believes that people tend to just complicate your life, but that she’s just gotten used to the complications. The archaeologist's life suits her; something that gives her a lot of pleasure. She thinks archaeology has a lot more life in it than you may expect. Benny is quite rightfully horrified at the obsessive collection of her photographs Traloor has compiled. ‘The Stone’s Lament’ is notable for being the first audio appearance of quite possibly my favourite character in this whole range – a seven foot Killoran who got his rocks off with Benny, not realising that she was possessed by an evil witch called Avril Fenman (trust me, I’ll be getting to the ‘Bernice Summerfield’ novels in good time). To play Mr Wall, we’ve got the wonderful Harry Myers… and his performance here is top notch. Adrian is convinced that Traloor is barking mad for wanting to settle on Rhinvil. He can think of far more comfortable ways of getting some privacy – like a pleasure station or a private island. It never ceases to amaze him that Benny can dig up anything at all with a few trowels and brushes… as he’d rather focus on using a JCB to dig the biggest hole possible! Killorans are apparently born uncouth, but Benny vouches for Adrian, and claims that he is a good man. Adrian decides to get hammered in Traloor’s bar, and then nearly shits himself when someone pretending to be Benny starts shouting after him!

Barren, rocky and surrounded by a thunderstorms – that’s the best way to describe the desolate planet of Rhinvil. Nobody ever wants to come here, so its the perfect place for a reclusive billionaire to build his gigantic mansion. Bratheen Traloor is in the midst of having a new wing built onto his home, with plans to turn it into a gallery for any artefacts he comes across during his amateur archaeological expeditions. Only, something has went very wrong on the surface of Rhinvil. It appears that the Killoran construction crew have vanished without a trace, causing the building work to grind to a halt. The head of the construction crew, Adrian Wall, has been sent to investigate by Irving Braxiatel. Accompanying him is Prof Summerfield, as Traloor wants her expert opinion on an artefact found during the construction work… but his interest in Benny extends far beyond mere academia. ‘The Stone’s Lament’ comes to us from a writer that I’ve got mixed opinions on. Tucker has done some really good stuff for BigFinish, and I’d happily go back and listen to ‘The Warehouse’ any time, but his earlier contributions to audio Who always felt a little bit half-baked… and this is no exception. The house is sentient and trying to force Benny and Adrian to leave, because it contains the sentience of the planet, who is in love with its billionaire owner. The plot is easily one of the weaker aspects of this story. That being said, even I wasn’t expecting Traloor to be revealed as a fucking Yandere! He’s got Benny’s pictures plastered all over the walls of his bedroom, and its blatantly obvious that he probably gets off to them as well. He’s even got all of her lectures recorded, the creepy bastard! Its time to conclude ‘The Stone’s Lament’ with a chat about Toby Richards and Emily Baker’s work on the post-production. They’re still attempting to fucking deafen me and overpower the dialogue with their work. The sound design is pretty average – rain comes down heavily during a thunderstorm on Rhinvil, and the distorted voice of House sounds like someone has stuck a Dictaphone in a fish bowl. Construction equipment being moved around by Adrian. Voices phase in and out of shot, disorientating our Braxiatel representatives. Music playing at the bar inside of Traloor’s mansion. Waves lapping against the pebble beaches of Rhinvil. The mansion begins to collapse, great big stones and rocks rolling into the sea. The music is alright in ‘The Stone’s Lament’, but I really wish it wasn’t overpowering everything around it. I would like to be able to hear something of the dialogue at one point.

“I like to surround myself with beauty, Bernice.” - A sentient planet that has merged with an artificial intelligence, that just so happens to love its owner… and the owner just so happens to be a reclusive billionaire who has an unhealthy obsession with Benny. ‘The Stone’s Lament’ is pretty inoffensive, and it definitely wont set the literary world on fire. That being said, Lisa Bowerman puts on a really good performance, and Harry Myers does a fucking amazing job as Adrian Wall (who may have just become one of my favourite characters in this whole range). Its a good enough story, but by no means exceptional.
Review Date: 2021-06-06 04:06:26
Reviewed By: adamelijah (2291)
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7/10
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Benny goes to a castle on a remote planet to meet a rich man who lives alone with a high tech house. She's accompanied by the Caloran foreman of the workmen who are working on improvements. They find the workmen missing and the artifact is elusive.

This is fairly good with an intriguing mystery and the host being an intriguing enigma. This story has some great atmosphere (although the sound design does step on it a few times) and the mystery has a dark solution that's genuinely disturbing not in an edge-lord sort of ways that some Bennie stories of this era tried to be. This story has some awkward moments, but still works rather well.
Review Date: 2020-03-06 22:52:24
Reviewed By: Steven Ford (562)
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The inspiration for this one seems to be a childish glee on the part of the author that, being a Bernice Summerfield story rather than a Doctor Who one, it can be about sex and the characters can swear.

Benny turns up at the isolated mansion of a reclusive quintillionaire with her rough Kiloran colleague (some kind of of hominid 'canine' race, from what I gather), Adrian Wall, who apparently she had an embarrassing possessed sex incident with, to investigate some missing construction workers, employees of Wall's.

Some haunted house style goings on occur, including a false Benny voice that invites Adrian to her room at night. He tries it on, Benny dismisses him etc, proclaiming that she doesn't want any 'rough fur'.

It ultimately transpires that their gazillionaire host Mike Tucker - sorry, Bratheen Traloor - is obsessed with Benny and is basically a super creepy stalker with pictures of her everywhere and he has programmed his house computer with Benny's voice and as near to Benny's personality as he can manage. That apparently makes it very jealous and so it tries to get rid of Benny. It repeatedly calls Benny a 'bitch' and so on. There is about another TWENTY minues after this but I could not listen to the end of the recording. I trust the above is enough to explain why.

If, by the way, you are thinking (secretly) it sounds a little sexy and exciting, it really isn't. The writing is dull, the plot honestly not interesting and the situations just juvenile.

The soundtrack is also poor again, in the same mode as the last story, 'The Secret of Cassandra', more off putting 'music' that works against the mood of any given scene, and is just generally unpleasant to listen to. It honestly sounds unprofessional; in fact, the whole thing feels budget: there are only 2 characters and 2 voice actors besides Benny, the artwork is cheap looking. So far these 1 disc Benny productions have been very poor. Everything about them is third rate. The mediocre ratings they have here on the Time Scales are entirely justified. The one following this, 'The Extinction Event', is written by Lance Parkin, one of Doctor Who's finest alt media authors so that must be an improvement, right?
Review Date: 2017-05-19 01:35:46
Reviewed By: Drew Vogel (245)
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Typical Mike Tucker. The story is derivative, clumsy, and obvious, and the dialogue sounds like it was written by someone who has never met a person before. The "professional conflict" between Benny and Adrian, for example, is forced and contrived, relying on each party adopting a stupidly extremist and doctrinaire position. The "spurned lover" motif is unimaginative and borderline offensive.
Review Date: 2010-08-15 06:11:48
Reviewed By: jamesburney (14)
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Difficult one to review... There are some parts that are better than others but on the whole nothing worth writing home about. Some of this story seemed to me to be a bit contrived. For me this should be well down the wants list.